Crystal peak feedback summary

From the feedback I got from my media classroom we need:
To establish the villain more so the narrative of the trailer can make sense so the scenes that were in the draft before the last one needs to be added back in which is the old white ethnic background man on the newspaper where our protagonist is looking at. At the moment they just see a person being kidnapped in the past and in the current present situations they just a man running around. So we need to establish the villain more which on the newspaper so the narrative we want them to know and see becomes more clearer.

Furthermore they saw the teaser trailer's pace being to fast we need to slow down the pace in order for the audience to understand what's going on and to feel the atmosphere of the teaser trailer. In addition at the end of the bathroom scene where the protagonist hits the glass, they said that the sound of glass shattering doesn't sync in well with the punch and the glass shattering sound is obvious that it's a non digetic sound. One individual thought that scene was ending randomly, it was going to fast and it didn't really go well with the teaser trailer.

This is the scene that needs to be added back in and established more to make the narrative of the teaser trailer clearer.