Narrative and Structure Changes

We saw that our narrative didn't make sense with the selection of shots we had

so we deiced to add a few more scenes to continue on the story. For example: 

We added a action scene to make the trailer more excited and giving the audience a

illusion of a fight scene to come and also instead of a bedroom scene in the beginning 

we have a church scene we he start to get flashbacks of what happened to him in past.

I think these added scenes will be good and forward our story making the audience wanting to see more.